Monday, November 19, 2007

Its happened again.

Another lyric and tune has come to me. This one is catchier than the last I believe. I will not make the same mistake I did yesterday though. 10 hours of this lyric sung over and over ought to prevent the resurgence of that tragedy. I don't like the end of that sentence. It tried too hard to be wordy. It was forced a star shape block jammed into the circle, left there because it kind of works. How was that for being more metaphoric and less comparative?

Thats all for now.

Cheers,
Tyler

1 comment:

Natalie Jane said...

Good. Never forget a good song.
Paul Mccartney dreamed Yesterday. He was singing the tune to everyone asking them hat song it was filling in the word "yesterday" with "scrambled eggs" silly Paul.

and yes. nice metaphor.